My poem is about sunsets and how beautiful they are. I think I choose the right topic for my poem because I did a very well job on it. All the photos and videos were good for the visual poem and all the shots I got matched with the words. My visuals have a huge impact on my poem because all the visuals are of the sun setting and the clouds moving through. My imagery changed my whole poem because if I didn't have the pictures or videos my poem would be so boring and plain.
The overall effects on my visual poem impacted my poem well because the way they just fit into the video was great. The special effects change the mood of the whole poem because it fade a lot and has a transition into a different photo and that make it more soothing. When you have effects then it makes it more meaningful by showing that the audience can be conferable watching it. Other then the shots just changing with no effect. The audience probably feels better when the shots fade then when they are switching so stiffly.
Am I satisfied with my finished product? Yes I believe I did a very good job. I think my product was great it was finished with many different photos and videos. I had enough shots to cover all the audio which is good, I also showed visuals that matched the actual topic. This project was fairly easy for me especially because it was a one person project; my last project we had to be in a team and that didn't work as good as I thought is was going to be.
i really like the sunset
ReplyDeletemaybe talk louder
good time lapse
good visuals
ReplyDeleteneeds a better background sounds
good lyrics
good music
ReplyDeleteneed more video
good lyrics
nice job
ReplyDeletegood b-roll
nice audio
The poem was awesomely written, it was very cool.
ReplyDeleteAt the end it kind of stops abruptly
the shots were awesome.
Hoi, Jasmine that was AWESOME!!!
ReplyDeleteNothing was wrong.
Good sound quality.
Compliment:Great time lapse
ReplyDeleteArea of Improvement:Some shots were too bright
Compliment:Good Broll
Great choice of music it helped add to your Visual Poem.
ReplyDeleteYou should have recited your poem with a lot more expression it was kind of monotone.
You also had great visuals I liked your timelapse.
Really nice B-roll and how you used them.
ReplyDeleteI think you could of been more expressive in your poem.
The music matches in the background.
I like the B-roll.
ReplyDeleteOne thing that could be better the speed of your reading.
I really like the content of your A-roll.
Nice timelapse throughout
ReplyDeleteVoice over was not recited with expression
Nice colors in poem
Good shots, i like the sunsets
ReplyDeleteBlurry on the last shot
nicely done
I like your sunset pictures and videos.
ReplyDeleteI think one thing that could be better is when you talked faster at the end.
I also like your time lapse.
I liked your use of the ken burnz effect. I dont feel your music matches well with the mood your poem was trying to set but hey, thats just me. I like your shots of the sky!
ReplyDeleteGood time lapses of the sun setting
ReplyDeleteThe voice over has no expression
Good text layover
The rhyme scheme you used was quite clever.
ReplyDeleteYour voice was quite dull.
The b-roll matched the a-roll really well.
I like your time lapse of the clouds
ReplyDeleteYou stuttered in the voice over
I like your text layovers on the screen
good text layovers, could have more expression when reading, nice shots of the sun
ReplyDeleteYour shots were so nice! The shot that has the word beautiful on it is kind of dark. I liked your poem it was pretty well written.
ReplyDeleteGreat effects with the time-lapse
ReplyDeleteread with more of a rhythm
good shots
Compliments: I like the idea of your poem and the music you put with it
ReplyDeleteCriticism: I think you should've read your poem with more emotion
Compliment: I like your B-Roll and the nice time lapses
like the pictures
ReplyDeletesome music was loud
nicely done
Great shots of the sunsets. Nothing needs improvement. Great background music.
ReplyDeleteI like the time lapse that you used.
ReplyDeleteI think you could have said the poem a little better
I liked the poem itself and what it said.
I really liked the time-lapse of the the sky, SUPER PRETTY :3.
ReplyDeleteYour voice was kinda soft I think it could've been louder, also you repeated some words.
I loved the sunset of the mountain. Breathtaking pictures.